
mission
Story editing
Your story deserves a personal look with your intention in mind
I am committed to helping you enhance your story by identifying weaknesses, explaining the effect those weaknesses could have on your story, and making suggestions to solve those weaknesses—without detracting from your unique voice.
SERVICES
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Proofreading for comics
For spelling, grammar, and formatting, either at the script level or for finished, illustrated and lettered pages.
02
Manuscript Evaluation
Get big-picture story edits in a revision letter before a full developmental edit, or for self-motivated writers on a budget.
03
Developmental editing
Get story edits within the manuscript plus a revision letter.
Blog
LATEST POSTS
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Second-person Narration
Second-person narration is a real risk for an author to employ. It certainly isn’t perfect. But it is misunderstood.
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“Show Don’t Tell” and the Better Advice for Prose Writers
“Show don’t tell” is good advice for specific situations, but it’s been taken to mean “always show, never tell”, and…
